tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36200623.post7882073679898004247..comments2023-06-04T08:30:48.606-07:00Comments on Mike Hawthorne: Sprint shirt designs 08 pt. 1Mike Hawthornehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13320163942600132518noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36200623.post-72923438999696830682008-03-27T12:35:00.000-07:002008-03-27T12:35:00.000-07:00Thanks for the comments, guys. I've already done u...Thanks for the comments, guys. I've already done up a new version, and will post it tomorrow. <BR/><BR/>Best!<BR/>MikeMike Hawthornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13320163942600132518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36200623.post-7398872213896790402008-03-27T10:04:00.000-07:002008-03-27T10:04:00.000-07:00Hey Mike! Hope all is well. A t-shirt?!? Very cool...Hey Mike! Hope all is well. A t-shirt?!? Very cool. Here's my comments for what they're worth...<BR/><BR/>LOVE the tank and surrounding frame/graphic. Direct and will look great on the shirt. I guess my issue with the design, and I don't feel this way 100%, is that the tank and character don't seem to mesh too well. I think the guy's facial features could use some hammering out, to make them stand out more prominently. I think going more graphic (Illustrator type work) would meld your character and logo. As you said, definitely change the font, and if it were me, I'd get rid of the form fitting border on the bottom and just flatten that black out or something. Love the shells popping off, nice. And I definitely go more for the B&W versions.<BR/><BR/>Take it with a grain of salt my friend, I don't know how much my comments are worth! :)<BR/><BR/>Still cool even if you don't change it! Take care!Daniel Hardestyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01671623076078096315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36200623.post-31231262043615412212008-03-27T09:31:00.000-07:002008-03-27T09:31:00.000-07:00I don't think that the bottom looks like a dress, ...I don't think that the bottom looks like a dress, but if you wanted you could extend the leg out to show the knee, which might help alleviate that problem for you. Also, I like all of the versions minus the white on black one...I don't think that one reads very well considering the amount of shadow you're using in the drawing.Patrick Hooverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04969763515481752664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36200623.post-60066682229348379392008-03-27T08:26:00.000-07:002008-03-27T08:26:00.000-07:00Thanks man! Yeah, it does get chunky. I think it *...Thanks man! Yeah, it does get chunky. I think it *might* work on a shirt, but I'm stilling fighting with it. <BR/><BR/>My biggest issue is that I tried to make a figure of sorts with the tank as a head, but I worry that the flared bottom looks like a dress...which was unintentional. <BR/><BR/>mikeMike Hawthornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13320163942600132518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36200623.post-35460365325029744692008-03-27T08:03:00.000-07:002008-03-27T08:03:00.000-07:00Nice! I'm digging the first colored one, but I don...Nice! I'm digging the first colored one, but I don't think you need that heavy of a stroke around the art and the random dots could be a little distracting.<BR/><BR/>Other than that, let it ride!<BR/><BR/>-JustinJustin Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16139693560312547605noreply@blogger.com